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I really, really love this - like all the rest of your work - but there seems to be missing something in this. I've seen it in more of your work too.
Seeing the 'Advanced Critique Encouraged', I thought I'd try to find out what it is that I miss. So don't feel offended, it's just one person's view. Might be completely wrong, you know

Anyway... there's something in this that I miss. It's not sparkling, like it cóúld do. It's nearly alive, only not completely. And the strange thing is, when I see the small view, it seems more alive to me. So perhaps I know what causes the 'trouble'... it seems a bit too much preset.
I love the blue-white part right under the middle, but the black is what kills it - just a little - because of the texture, maybe. I'd advice you to experiment a bit further with this... make it more your own, not a preset option in Photoshop. I can see you can do that

ow my, much text. I hope you will be happy with this...